Showing posts with label Publishers. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Publishers. Show all posts
Thursday, February 25, 2010
Never Change YOUR Style
This came to me the other day as I was thinking about how competitive the writing market is. When I thought about how competitive things are and how much agents and publishers would like for you to change some things to be more marketable, it occurred to me how easy it is to interpret that as changing your style. Style is very important. There really is no right or wrong; there are styles, preferences, and tastes. Every book will have an audience. There are some books out there on the shelves that I wonder how did they ever get published that other people absolutely LOVE and adore. There are other books that are widely acclaimed and received that I just can't get into.
My sister is an excellent storyteller. She starts out with a hook to grab your interest so that whatever comes next, you are willing to sit through just to get to that end. She throws in enough humor and drama to keep you entertained to the end. My mother tends to be more long-winded in her stories and explanations and will exaggerate the truth of the actual occurrences to create drama to keep you interested, and most importantly she enjoys her own stories. I tend to rush through things. I am so excited about revealing the big twist and surprise at the end of my story that I rush through the details to get to the end. My stories tend to be vivid and complex and provoke thought, and a lot of times I can easily lose my audience if I get too technical without the detailed explanations.
Now, if you gave my mother, sister, and I the same story to tell... we would each tell it in a different way. We all share the memory of how our mother scared the crap out of us one Halloween when we were younger. My mother's version involves us breaking rules and deserving a good scare. My sister's version involves a note giving us permission to trick-or-treat, and our cunning mother switching off the electricity so that we'd be in complete darkness when we returned home. My version involves me being the foolish hero and volunteering to inspect the thumping and bumping in the darkness and jumping ten feet back, knocking everyone over, when our mother finally revealed herself, face painted white, shouting "It's Halloween!" The other details I would probably rush through to get to that point as I did in the previous sentence (a long one, I know).
I like to foreshadow, switch perspectives, and focus on relationships between characters. I particularly don't believe in there being one "hero" because that, to me, is not realistic or as thrilling as the combining of forces and strengths to overcome obstacles and challenges... that's just my style. Is it as marketable as the hero on a journey who comes into power? Probably not, but the market is ever changing, and not to mention there's always the possibility that someone can come along and set a new standard in the market.
So here's the bottom line... stick to your style! Write for your self! If you love what you write then chances are others will too. Will you have as many in your audience as J.K. Rowling or Stephen King? Who knows. Such thoughts can stop productivity and creativity. If you immerse yourself in your world, then you will never be lost because you know your world like no other. If they suggest changes... make the changes, but don't change your style. Style separates you from everyone else. How many times did Rowling get rejected? How many times did Tolkien think people wouldn't read what he wrote? But that never stopped them and they put a bit of themselves, as storytellers and as human beings, in every word... let us all do the same.
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Friday, December 11, 2009
A pain in the arse!
Editing, revising, revisions... revising revisions... my least favorite part of writing a novel. Writing the novel was not so bad. I cranked out an average of five pages an hour, completing a chapter of 20 pages in a span of four hours. I wrote maybe eight or sometimes twelve hours a day. No big deal right? Now that the manuscript is complete, I've come to find that the work has barely begun!
I don't have a decent workspace. I write on my futon with a meal tray and the keyboard hanging off of the edge, which contorts my hands and causes me a great deal of discomfort. I frequently have to take breaks because of this.
My cat, Sam, is spoiled rotten! He's always trying to curl in my lap. He will just stare at me with big green eyes until I give in to his demands.
Then, to top it all off, a writer can probably literally rewrite the same sentence over and over again and so it's difficult to not nitpick over the same things.
So, what I like to try and do is do a "once over," or a "quick and dirty" if you will. I revise the entire novel first looking for grammar and punctuation mistakes. Then, I go through a second round for style and content. I have a hard time with this because I have a tendency to want to add MORE and my novel is already a little over 100,000 words, which may seem scary to an agent or publisher (yes I am aware of this).
I'm currently on the fourth chapter and things are going smoothly so far. One thing I do that helps me a lot is that I keep a notepad open on my computer of all the changes that I plan to make. I don't implement the changes right away because I want to get a broad scope of things before, just in case some of the changes cancel out others.
Well, back to work!
(Recommended reading: The Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White)
I don't have a decent workspace. I write on my futon with a meal tray and the keyboard hanging off of the edge, which contorts my hands and causes me a great deal of discomfort. I frequently have to take breaks because of this.
My cat, Sam, is spoiled rotten! He's always trying to curl in my lap. He will just stare at me with big green eyes until I give in to his demands.
Then, to top it all off, a writer can probably literally rewrite the same sentence over and over again and so it's difficult to not nitpick over the same things.
So, what I like to try and do is do a "once over," or a "quick and dirty" if you will. I revise the entire novel first looking for grammar and punctuation mistakes. Then, I go through a second round for style and content. I have a hard time with this because I have a tendency to want to add MORE and my novel is already a little over 100,000 words, which may seem scary to an agent or publisher (yes I am aware of this).
I'm currently on the fourth chapter and things are going smoothly so far. One thing I do that helps me a lot is that I keep a notepad open on my computer of all the changes that I plan to make. I don't implement the changes right away because I want to get a broad scope of things before, just in case some of the changes cancel out others.
Well, back to work!
(Recommended reading: The Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White)
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Wednesday, December 9, 2009
What's the Difference Between a Query Letter and a Cover Letter?
Sheesh! Trying to find this information proved to be challenging even for the almighty GOOGLE. However, with our powers combined we formed, no, not Captain Planet, but a powerful team with the answer to this ever puzzling question.
Here's some information from a website that I think said it best:
What's the difference between a query letter and a cover letter? Author and instructor Alexis O'Neill uses an overhead projector to aptly demonstrate the difference. She pretends to shake her own hand casting a silhouette of a handshake. That's a cover letter. Meaning, "Hi, here's my manuscript." Then she traces a question mark. Meaning, "Hi, would you be interested...?" That's a query letter.
(http://www.scbwisocal.org/kitetales/query.htm)
So to put it simply, a cover letter is very short and concise and literally something you put over the rest of your submitted materials (e.g. query letter, synopsis, sample pages/chapter, etc.). The cover letter should be in the format of a standard business letter. This website has a few decent samples:
A query letter is a single page letter, single spaced, with spaces between the three main paragraphs. The first paragraph should be your hook and generally contains a bit of narrative about your story to entice the reader. The second paragraph usually runs a bit longer than the first and provides the main plot points of your work. Some agencies want to know how the plot is resolved by the end of this paragraph so be sure to read each agency's specific guidelines and requirements. The third paragraph can be a short blurb about yourself or your writing career/credentials, but whatever you write make sure that it ties in with what you're submitting. For instance, don't talk about being a 40-year-old mother of two unless the book has something to do with that.
There's a lot of information out there. Some people are confused about the difference and so the information might seem confusing. One website described a cover letter with the exact specifics of a query letter, which prompted me to investigate further. My advice is to research research research and then research some more until you feel confident enough with the information you've gathered.
Note: There's also a difference between submitting materials to an agent versus submitting materials to a publisher so be sure to look for those specifics also. Again, read the submission guidelines and criteria of the agency you are submitting to carefully and thoroughly.
Best of luck to you all!
(Recommended reading: Writer's Market 2010: Novel and Short Story Writers)
Here's some information from a website that I think said it best:
What's the difference between a query letter and a cover letter? Author and instructor Alexis O'Neill uses an overhead projector to aptly demonstrate the difference. She pretends to shake her own hand casting a silhouette of a handshake. That's a cover letter. Meaning, "Hi, here's my manuscript." Then she traces a question mark. Meaning, "Hi, would you be interested...?" That's a query letter.
(http://www.scbwisocal.org/kitetales/query.htm)
So to put it simply, a cover letter is very short and concise and literally something you put over the rest of your submitted materials (e.g. query letter, synopsis, sample pages/chapter, etc.). The cover letter should be in the format of a standard business letter. This website has a few decent samples:
A query letter is a single page letter, single spaced, with spaces between the three main paragraphs. The first paragraph should be your hook and generally contains a bit of narrative about your story to entice the reader. The second paragraph usually runs a bit longer than the first and provides the main plot points of your work. Some agencies want to know how the plot is resolved by the end of this paragraph so be sure to read each agency's specific guidelines and requirements. The third paragraph can be a short blurb about yourself or your writing career/credentials, but whatever you write make sure that it ties in with what you're submitting. For instance, don't talk about being a 40-year-old mother of two unless the book has something to do with that.
There's a lot of information out there. Some people are confused about the difference and so the information might seem confusing. One website described a cover letter with the exact specifics of a query letter, which prompted me to investigate further. My advice is to research research research and then research some more until you feel confident enough with the information you've gathered.
Note: There's also a difference between submitting materials to an agent versus submitting materials to a publisher so be sure to look for those specifics also. Again, read the submission guidelines and criteria of the agency you are submitting to carefully and thoroughly.
Best of luck to you all!
(Recommended reading: Writer's Market 2010: Novel and Short Story Writers)
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